I looked at your resume and cover letter and thought that they were shining. I wouldn’t change a thing about them. So on to your professionalization memo. Perhaps something that would be good to talk about is what you found out about yourself when searching Google anonymously. It may be surprising what you may or may not find. Things such as NDSU information and newspaper articles will often pop up and if it’s something that you want to be known, it’s a good idea to try and link to it somehow so google can index them better to get them to the top of the search list.
Other than that I can’t think of much else to add, I had problems adding to mine as well…
Great job, keep up the good work!